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Cyndi L. Stuart's avatar

It's a winner of a story! Great start and I'm all in with the magical bowling shoes. But now I'm wondering πŸ€” if athletes foot will make an appearance. 😁☺️

Terry's avatar

Thank you! Haven't thought about athlete's foot. Hmm....we'll have to see.

N. N. Light's Book Heaven's avatar

Love this short story. I want to read more from these two. Excellent news about the award. Ooooh, I am excited to hear about your rewrite. Can't wait!

Terry's avatar

Thank you. The rewrite is finally taking shape. Im excited about it.

Kim Janine Ligon, Author's avatar

Love your short story. It did make me laugh out loud.

Terry's avatar

Kim, thank you! And congratulations on that awesome review!